tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1892083748555571767.post7867543311307043958..comments2023-12-23T19:32:16.381-07:00Comments on The Goat's Lunch Pail: Twofer Tuesday--Editing Counts, Doesn't It?Leah J. Utashttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08497599109798015888noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1892083748555571767.post-17406552715069165602010-02-16T16:20:35.372-07:002010-02-16T16:20:35.372-07:00Thanks, Redbush and Reb.Thanks, Redbush and Reb.Leah J. Utashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08497599109798015888noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1892083748555571767.post-21719897441623369932010-02-16T14:25:32.137-07:002010-02-16T14:25:32.137-07:00I like your lines...can't wait to read. The ph...I like your lines...can't wait to read. The photo is lovely.Rebhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05318594769530526005noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1892083748555571767.post-77408741771097811652010-02-16T14:12:23.907-07:002010-02-16T14:12:23.907-07:00Hmm! " Butt snugged up to his shoulder",...Hmm! " Butt snugged up to his shoulder", - I could just feel the kick when he shot! It sounds like the perfect rendition for a great western!Redbushhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12490627592871916623noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1892083748555571767.post-32305315111454232922010-02-16T09:55:26.755-07:002010-02-16T09:55:26.755-07:00Clare, thanks so much. I'm hoping to do more w...Clare, thanks so much. I'm hoping to do more writing in editing, but it's way too early to tell. Stuff needs fleshing out, I'm sure.<br />As to the trip pics, there'll be no escaping them here.<br /><br />Messymimi, that's wonderful to know. Thank you.Leah J. Utashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08497599109798015888noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1892083748555571767.post-40149391971119623452010-02-16T09:52:04.017-07:002010-02-16T09:52:04.017-07:00Your writing always makes me want to read more.Your writing always makes me want to read more.messymimihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10649529601786689712noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1892083748555571767.post-84887354136679772862010-02-16T09:40:36.011-07:002010-02-16T09:40:36.011-07:00I'm a Chris Moore fan, too! Your sentences wi...I'm a Chris Moore fan, too! Your sentences will hold up very well, I think, and yes, editing officially counts.<br /><br />It better, because my writing happens in the edit. I write like I drew, gestural squiggles first. No one can tell what it is until I start filling in the shading and detail on the editing passes. And they are numerous.<br /><br />Keep giving us pictures from your trip. My current trip will show mostly snowy roads.Clare2ehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06105229820107294986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1892083748555571767.post-18754986232630959782010-02-16T08:01:13.190-07:002010-02-16T08:01:13.190-07:00Kathleen, thank you. It's good to know.
Cryst...Kathleen, thank you. It's good to know.<br /><br />Crystal, thank you for your kind words, and I'm glad the pic is a hit.Leah J. Utashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08497599109798015888noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1892083748555571767.post-72190143556014885922010-02-16T07:46:55.755-07:002010-02-16T07:46:55.755-07:00Your sentences have a great feel to them and are w...Your sentences have a great feel to them and are wonderfully descriptive. <br /><br />The photograph is beautiful, and I love Christopher Moore. Thanks for sharing!Crystal Phareshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14881609059618148820noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1892083748555571767.post-27342610746575187282010-02-16T07:40:35.954-07:002010-02-16T07:40:35.954-07:00Leah,
Sounds like a very wise Ma! You captured th...Leah, <br />Sounds like a very wise Ma! You captured the feeling quite well about holding the shotgun. <br />The Whale sentences are fun ~ thanks for the chuckle!Kathleen A. Ryanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10809993168019150186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1892083748555571767.post-77464254067125278902010-02-16T07:18:04.096-07:002010-02-16T07:18:04.096-07:00David, I appreciate the comment about the descript...David, I appreciate the comment about the description. Thanks. And I'm glad you enjoyed the pic. It is a beautiful spot.<br /><br />Thanks, df Bag Lady. You'll get your chance.Leah J. Utashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08497599109798015888noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1892083748555571767.post-34586232934377219702010-02-16T06:08:41.951-07:002010-02-16T06:08:41.951-07:00Your vampire western sounds like so much fun!
I...Your vampire western sounds like so much fun!<br />I'm looking forward to reading it in it's entirety.the Bag Ladyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17434610508260994331noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1892083748555571767.post-5725386263070547772010-02-16T03:53:09.357-07:002010-02-16T03:53:09.357-07:00I dig "cold feel of the barrel." Very de...I dig "cold feel of the barrel." Very descriptive.<br /><br />Beautiful photo of Tropes De Collantes.David Cranmerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04749857752139212888noreply@blogger.com