Our current bedtime story, translated from Finnish, is about a fellow who wanders Finland with a bunny. He hits it with his car, rescues it, and walks away from his life with the hare at his side.
It's wonderful and funny and a joy to read.
Two from The Year of the Hare by Arto Paasilinna (Penguin 2010):
"Hannikainen had a knapsack on his back; a hare's head peeped out from under the flap.
Vatanen rushed over to them, grabbed the knapsack from Hannikainen's back, undid the cord, and welcomed the hare into his arms."
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I've spent the last few days or so trying to craft a query letter and synopsis for Dead Broke.
I've got the bare bones of both. It's going to be several more days before I have something I'm content to let sit for a while.
Here are two from the query:
"Eddie Corbett, shot dead over a gambling debt, wakes up on the wrong side of the afterlife. If he wants a new life he has to earn it by doing off-label jobs for God like hauntings and sending people to their deaths."
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15 comments:
I'd want to read more based on that snip of your story.
The Year of the Hare. I may have to look for that one.
Thanks, Laurita.
David,it's a good read.
I'd totally want more given that hook!
Ohh! I find your query very enticing. Hope others do too!
Oh, I like your lines! The story about the hare sounds interesting.
Thanks so much, Betty and Reb.
It's a pleasure to read your blog. You are one of the people i want to see make it big in the publishing world. You work hard at your craft and you care. That's important.
Those two sentences from the query should leave no one in any doubt that it's an interesting story.
Mary Anne in Kentucky
I'm with "solarity" on the query!
And that bedtime story? Sounds like one I need to begin.
Thank you for those wonderful words, Messymimi.
Mary Anne, thank you.
Thanks, Dawn. I think you'll enjoy the hare story.
As always, I agree that your lines are intriguing! Good luck with the queries!
Thanks, Bag Lady.
Jeepers Leah, don't mess with your lead sentence in the query. It's a keeper.
Frank, that means a lot. Thanks.
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