Tuesday, June 14, 2011

Two Sentence Tuesday--Sinking My Teeth In It

I've gotten some work done on BloodLovers these last few days.  I've changed a character's name and am doing my best to kick up the heat a bit.
Here's a taste:
"He wanted to bite into the tender flesh of her thigh while she sank her sharp fangs into him. He wanted to fill himself with her pulsing, salt wine while she took his, hearts pounding, teeth ripping flesh, sucking and growling until they lost themselves in taking and giving life until neither remembered where they began or ended."
I haven't done much reading lately. The nice Jehovah's Witness ladies came by yesterday to drop off their magazines. Included this month was a flyer for the upcoming JW conventions in Edmonton and Calgary.
Two attention -grabbing lines from it in reference to a prophetic dream in the Biblical Book of Daniel :
"Why should you be interested in that dream? Because its fulfillment will have a direct impact on the lives of everyone living on this planet, including you and your loved ones."
Thanks everyone. For more or to get in on the fun please see the Women of Mystery.


the Bag Lady said...

Wow, great lines cousin! Keep up the good work.

Leah J. Utas said...

Why thank you, cousin. Good incentive to keep going.

Dorte H said...

If you ask me, there is plenty of heat in those lines :)

Bossy Betty said...

Whoa! Your writing is so full of action and emotion!

Leah J. Utas said...

Thank you, Dorte.

Betty, thanks.

Good to hear these comments.

Reb said...

Phew, is it hot in here, or was that just your lines? Well done.

messymimi said...

Your words bring moments to life. Their literature just makes me want to say, "Yeah, right."

Leah J. Utas said...

Thanks so much, Reb.

Messymimi, that is wonderful to hear. Thanks.

Clare2e said...

I like the "salt wine!"

Leah J. Utas said...

Thank you, Clare.