Tuesday, June 8, 2010
Twofer Tuesday -- Ducks In A Row?
I'm still editing A Fly on the Wall. I had a particularly sticky problem in chapter eight that took a while to sort out. Or, to make the photo relevant, I had trouble getting all my ducks in a row.
I eventually sorted it out. The rest of the corrections in logic should be easier.
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Here's a freshly edited passage:
"Brelyan turned on his stomach and buried his face in the pillow. What was he missing?"
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Our current bedtime story is from The Complete Tales of Nikolai Gogol, Vol 1. (University of Chicago Press, 1985)
We decided to read Gogol after my husband found a reference to him in one of my cookbooks. Gogol's Evenings on a Farm Near Dikanka sounded like our kind of stories.
A quick internet search sealed it. In the second picture Gogol looks quite a bit like my husband. I ordered both volumes and offered them as my husband's birthday present.
Here are two sentences, and two extras from The Fair at Sorochintsy:
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" ' Why it looks like two men: one on top, the other under. Which of them is the devil I can't make out yet!'
'Why, who is on top?'
'A woman!'
'Oh, well, then that's the devil!' "
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Labels:
Common Goldeneye,
ducklings,
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Women of Mystery,
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8 comments:
Hmmm, what was Brelyan missing? Now I'm going to wonder until I get to read the whole thing.
You always pick the most interesting lines.
Messymimi, thank you so much.
I agree with messymimi - can hardly wait to read the whole thing!
(Love the duck photo, too!)
Thanks, dfBag Lady. I thought the baby duckies were cute.
Don't you love the editing process?
Can't wait to read all.
Mary
Mary, does editing ever end?
I have heard many good things about Gogol's work, and after reading your post, I'll definitely have to check him out.
I'm glad you got your ducks in a row -- and that adorable picture of the ducks!
And guess what. You have an award on my blog! :)
TL, good to see you here and thanks for the award. I read your post and I'll pick up the award later.
The duckies really are cute.
I'm enjoying Gogol. I think you might, too.
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